You said:
Can I say The location is good, and the staff are friendly. The bedroom I stayed in was fine, but the bathroom was not clean. There were black spots (which looked like mold or stains) and a dead bug on the shelf below the sink. The shelf also looked dusty, so I did not use the towels stored there.
I informed the front desk on the first night of my stay and requested that housekeeping clean the bathroom. I even texted them photos of the sink. However, the only thing that was done the next day was that the trash can was emptied. This was very disappointing. I think a 4 star hotel should be much better than this.
ChatGPT said:
Yes—you can say that, and it’s clear, but if this is for a hotel review or a complaint, it will sound more polished and effective with a few small edits. Here’s a refined version that keeps your meaning and tone but reads more professional and balanced:
The location is good, and the staff are friendly. The bedroom I stayed in was fine; however, the bathroom was not clean. There were black spots (which appeared to be mold or stains) and a dead bug on the shelf below the sink. The shelf also looked dusty, so I did not feel comfortable using the towels stored there.
I informed the front desk on the first night of my stay and requested that housekeeping clean the bathroom. I also texted photos of the sink as requested. Unfortunately, the only action taken the following day was that the trash can was emptied. This was very disappointing. I expect